Wednesday, February 17, 2010

I love living life and i am happy

I think Nick very strong because Nick can do any thing without two hands.Nick do work without help.After that, Nick is thankful for what he has.For me Nick is a strong person because choice better not bitter.I am thankful to Allah because my body enough not miss one, different Nick he not enough for example he no hands and legs.Good moral this video is strong in life ,not try before do and try again if fail. I can use what Nick use, "if fail, i try again and again and again.For me,if i fail i try again because first fail not fail forever and i try again,again and again.Then, i see Nick can swimming and can't swimming.I thankful for my life. I hope Nick can through every day without trouble and i hope you get succesful.Your video give me many motivation to me.Lastly, i need more motivation to succses in my life and i like my life.

3 comments:

miey said...

nice essay...you have many idea to share,but you many use the same words in your sentences..so,my suggestion you can add new vocab or can use methaphore and simile sentences...i hope you can make changes in your essay..tq

Along Udm said...
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Along Udm said...

your essay essay good but,sometime check your grammar mistake